Flash Fiction Challenge: 200 Words at a Time, Part Four

Chuck Wendig's Terrible Minds
Chuck Wendig’s Terrible Minds

Chuck Wendig’s Latest Flash Fiction Challenge. Part Four of JDFitch’s story: Unpredictable Magic.

God, how she hated dance music. Tony blared that crap every day at work, and after four years, she couldn’t take it anymore. Most had their I-phones or mp3’s and earbuds to stuff in their heads. The rest of them had to suffer. Her fist smashed the bread dough with a vengeance. One fist beat the soft, yeasty mass over and over.
“Screw this.” [Gloria] reached and ‘touched’ the electric plug that asshole’s antique radio was plugged into. Sparks crackled from the outlet, the acrid smell of burnt plastic ripped across the room.
“Judas Priest!” The sift super rushed over and yanked the cord from the wall. “Tony, this piece of crap is gone. You understand me? Three times in one week? Burn it, burn your own house down, but keep it out of my bakery.” Allen rammed the offending device into Tony’s chest before stalking off.
Gloria could not help the smile that crossed her lips. Then common sense took over. Shit.Why did magic have to be so unpredictable? Two years, and she still could not predict the outcomes, not like her teacher. Who would no doubt taste the magic in the air around her.

Life sucked chunks.
*************************************************** Doreen Queen
She had to be more careful or else be caught by the Authorities. They might taste the magic she leaked after tweaking the radio.

Most kids were screened by preschool to see whether they had talent – somehow Gloria had been missed.

Good thing Claudia had seen her magician’s performance at a child’s birthday party. Everything had gone wrong that day – instead of a rabbit, she pulled a python out of the hat. Of course, the party had been for boys, so that went over well. But it didn’t go over with the parents when her bra and panties had pulled out of her sleeve along with the handkerchiefs. Not sure how that happened.

Claudia had tasted the taint and offered to tutor her if she promised to stop playing magician.

Gloria needed to control herself first if she wanted to control the magic. Otherwise, some Telemage would catch a whiff and she would be slammed into a Control Chair. Then some Docmage would fry out her brain section that created magic – and they weren’t too careful about what else was around, like body functions or reasoning. She didn’t want to spend the rest of her life drooling in the corner of a closed ward, finger-painting.

Part Three (Paul Baughman)

It hadn’t always been this way. Once magicians had been an accepted, if not welcome, part of society. The Magic War was hundreds of years in the past, but the results have echoed down the years into the present. The old saw about bad apples still applied.

Time to try out some of Claudia’s tutoring before a passing patrol sensed what she had done. Gloria let her hands continue working the bread dough on autopilot. She let her mind drift until she could sense the magic crackling in her skin, vibrating in her bones, and even curling off the end of each hair. When she had the feeling solidly nailed down, she sucked it all into her hands and grounded it to the earth.

The sense of magic vanished. It worked! She smiled happily. It was the first time she had successfully used one of Claudia’s techniques on her own. Maybe now she wouldn’t have to worry as much about getting caught.

The happy, proud feeling faded as she realized the bread dough she was working felt odd.

She opened her eyes and looked down to find her hands buried to the wrist in the finest cake she had ever seen.


Part Four (Gabriella G)

“Are you kidding me?” she grumbled, looking around furtively for a moment.

Claudia would kill her if she knew, which knowing her – she probably already did. As much as she loved her teacher, there was something creepy about the all-knowing aura she exuded, something all together too omnipresent.

A sharp rap at the door to the bakery snapped her out of the reverie, and she winced as Allen’s screech came floating out of the back office,

“Gloria, be a doll and tell whoever is impatient enough to come to my bakery a whole hour early to leave at once!”

“On it” she called back, and shot a glare at the cake. Despite it being the bane of her existence, she had to admit – there was nothing like perfectly baked German Chocolate Cake at 7 in the morning. Snapping herself out of a reverie mostly circling around cake, she carefully picked up the masterpiece,

“Tony” she whispered, “Could you hold this a moment?”

The asshole nodded, a confused look glazing his features as Gloria smiled charmingly at him, opening the door to greet the stern-looking man draped in a yellow cloak,

“How may I help you today, Mr.Telemage, sir?”

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